{"id":1185,"date":"2008-10-06T14:24:34","date_gmt":"2008-10-06T18:24:34","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/?p=1185"},"modified":"2008-10-08T17:51:12","modified_gmt":"2008-10-08T21:51:12","slug":"short-fiction-the-iron","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/2008\/10\/short-fiction-the-iron\/","title":{"rendered":"Short Fiction: The Iron"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.tate.org.uk\/servlet\/ViewWork?workid=71044&amp;searchid=19653\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft\" title=\"Le Cadeau, by Man Ray (click for original at Tate Gallery)\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/johnesimpson.com\/images\/lecadeau_manray_sm.jpg?resize=209%2C290&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" width=\"209\" height=\"290\" \/><\/a>Somewhere in her book of advice for writers, <em><a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/gp\/redirect.html?ie=UTF8&amp;location=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.amazon.com%2FStarting-Scratch-Rita-Mae-Brown%2Fdp%2F055334630X%2F&amp;tag=meaandpoi-20&amp;linkCode=ur2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325\" target=\"_blank\">Starting from Scratch<\/a><\/em><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"border:none !important; margin:0px !important;\" src=\"http:\/\/www.assoc-amazon.com\/e\/ir?t=meaandpoi-20&amp;l=ur2&amp;o=1\" border=\"0\" alt=\"\" width=\"1\" height=\"1\" \/>, Rita Mae Brown says something about writing a story from the point of view of a character other than the author&#8217;s own sex. I don&#8217;t remember the exact words, don&#8217;t have my copy with me, and can&#8217;t find the quote online. But she says something like this: &#8220;Until and unless you can write convincingly about a protagonist who&#8217;s the opposite sex from you, you can&#8217;t say you&#8217;re a mature writer.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>I thought this was challenging, to say the least. Who doesn&#8217;t want to be a mature anything? Who wants to believe they&#8217;re not already mature?<\/p>\n<p>So I tried a couple things. For one, I made the protagonist of <a title=\"RAMH 'Crossed Wires' entries\" href=\"https:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/category\/writing_cat\/crossed-wires-writing_cat\/\"><em>Crossed Wires<\/em><\/a> a woman. I also did a handful of short stories from a woman&#8217;s POV.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;The Iron&#8221; is one of those stories.<\/p>\n<p>It also is one of those stories which has been workshopped and revised to within an inch of its life &#8212; some would say beyond, probably. Agent X (whom I spoke of <a title=\"Earlier post: 'Getting It Out of My System (2)'\" href=\"https:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/2008\/09\/getting-it-out-of-my-system-2\/\">here<\/a>) hated one element of the story, which unfortunately was the <em>central<\/em> element: a steam iron&#8217;s place in a position of importance in a story about a married woman.<\/p>\n<p>(Agent X&#8217;s point, as she explained it, had something to do with the iron as a symbol of the oppression or outright enslavement of women, and hence an unsuitable vehicle as an object of a wife&#8217;s wonder. Something like that, anyhow.)<\/p>\n<p>As you will see, the steam iron in question has many features unlike those of ordinary appliances. Hope you like reading &#8220;The Iron&#8221; &#8212; regardless of your (or the author&#8217;s) sex. <a title=\"Short fiction: 'The Iron'\" href=\"https:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/the-iron\/\">Here<\/a> it is.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Update, 2008-10-08:<\/strong> Thanks to Marta&#8217;s gentle prodding in the comments on this post, I finally managed (thanks, Amazon!) to find exactly how Rita Mae Brown&#8217;s <em>Starting from Scratch<\/em> addresses this subject (emphasis added):<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>You must create men who love women and women who love men or your books will be lopsided. In the beginning of everyone&#8217;s work the dice are always loaded toward one&#8217;s own sex or sex preference. <em>Learning to unload those dice, to throw the bones honestly, is what maturity as an individual and as a writer is all about.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Somewhere in her book of advice for writers, Starting from Scratch, Rita Mae Brown says something about writing a story from the point of view of a character other than the author&#8217;s own sex. I don&#8217;t remember the exact words, don&#8217;t have my copy with me, and can&#8217;t find the quote online. 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