{"id":28721,"date":"2025-08-08T12:09:25","date_gmt":"2025-08-08T16:09:25","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/?p=28721"},"modified":"2025-08-08T12:09:27","modified_gmt":"2025-08-08T16:09:27","slug":"its-a-story-after-all-not-a-webcam","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/2025\/08\/its-a-story-after-all-not-a-webcam\/","title":{"rendered":"It&#8217;s a Story, After All, Not a Webcam"},"content":{"rendered":"<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-full\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"980\" height=\"841\" class=\"wp-image-28735\" style=\"width: 100%;\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/08\/23kpcchapter1_draft1point5_med-2.jpg?resize=980%2C841&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/08\/23kpcchapter1_draft1point5_med-2.jpg?w=980&amp;ssl=1 980w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/08\/23kpcchapter1_draft1point5_med-2.jpg?resize=300%2C257&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/johnesimpson.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/08\/23kpcchapter1_draft1point5_med-2.jpg?resize=768%2C659&amp;ssl=1 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 980px) 100vw, 980px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n<p class=\"smalltext\"><em>[Image: the opening and closing paragraphs of draft number&#8230; uh, well, let&#8217;s call it Draft 1.5 of <\/em>23kpc<em>.]<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>From <em><a href=\"https:\/\/whiskeyriverscommonplace.blogspot.com\/2005\/11\/listen-to-answer.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">whiskey river&#8217;s commonplace book<\/a><\/em>:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>Some people fear seeing or feeling anything about which there is no general agreement. For others, it is thrilling to be aware of innuendo, shading, complexity. For those who do not wish to step away from consensus, the creative is useless at best; at worst, it is dangerous. But for those who are intrigued by the multiplicity of reality and the unique possibilities of their own vision, the creative is the path they must pursue.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(Deena Metzger [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/books.google.com\/books?id=ReLLjNP4E4MC&amp;pg=PT9#v=onepage&amp;q&amp;f=false\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8230;and:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>I see now that my turbulent mind needs activity, that it must break out and try a hundred different ways before reaching the goal towards which I am always straining. There is an old leaven working in me, some black depth that must be appeased. Unless I am writhing like a serpent in the coils of a pythoness I am cold. I must recognize this and accept it, and to do so is the greatest happiness. Everything good that I have ever done has come about in this way.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(Eugene Delacroix [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/archive.org\/details\/journalofeugnede00dela\/page\/38\/mode\/1up\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8230;and:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>Wean Yourself<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Little by little, wean yourself.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>This is the gist of what I have to say.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>From an embryo, whose nourishment comes in the blood,<br>move to an infant drinking milk,<br>to a child on solid food,<br>to a searcher after wisdom,<br>to a hunter of more invisible game.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Think of how it is to have a conversation with an embryo.<br>You might say, &#8220;The world outside is vast and intricate.<br>There are wheatfields and mountain passes, and orchards in bloom.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>At night there are millions of galaxies, and in sunlight<br>the beauty of friends dancing at a wedding.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>You ask the embryo why he, or she, stays cooped up<br>in the dark with eyes closed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"margin-left: 12.5em;\">Listen to the answer.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>There is no &#8220;other world,&#8221;<br>I only know what I&#8217;ve experienced.<br>You must be hallucinating.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(Jelaluddin Rumi [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/archive.org\/details\/essentialrumi00jala\/page\/70\/mode\/2up\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8230;and:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>What I know in my bones is that I forget to take time to remember what I know. The world is holy. We are holy. All life is holy. Daily prayers are delivered on the lips of breaking waves, the whisperings of grasses, the shimmering of leaves.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(Terry Tempest Williams [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/archive.org\/details\/bestspiritualwri00phil_0\/page\/310\/mode\/1up\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8230;and:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><span style=\"font-variant: small-caps;\">Art is a wicked thing. It is what we are.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(Georgia O&#8217;Keeffe [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/archive.org\/details\/okeeffestieglitz0000eisl\/page\/494\/mode\/1up\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>From elsewhere:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>There should be a name for [the] moment in a story when, a situation having been established, a new character arrives. We automatically expect that new element to alter or complicate or deepen the situation. A man stands in an elevator, muttering under his breath about how much he hates his job. The door opens, someone gets in. Don\u2019t we automatically understand that this new person has appeared to alter or complicate or deepen the first man\u2019s hatred of his job? (Otherwise, what\u2019s he doing here? Get rid of him and find us someone who <em>will<\/em> alter, complicate, or deepen things. It\u2019s a story, after all, not a webcam.)<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(George Saunders [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/archive.org\/details\/swiminpondinrain0000saun\/page\/21\/mode\/1up\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8230;and:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>If we carefully inspect our experience as we read, we discover that the importance of physical detail is that it creates for us a kind of dream, a rich and vivid play in the mind. We read a few words at the beginning of the book or the particular story, and suddenly we find ourselves seeing not words on a page but a train moving through Russia, an old Italian crying, or a farmhouse battered by rain. We read on&#8212;dream on&#8212;not passively but actively, worrying about the choices the characters have to make, listening in panic for some sound behind the fictional door, exulting in characters\u2019 successes, bemoaning their failures. In great fiction, the dream engages us heart and soul; we not only respond to imaginary things&#8212;sights, sounds, smells&#8212;as though they were real, we respond to fictional problems as though they were real: We sympathize, think, and judge. We act out, vicariously, the trials of the characters and learn from the failures and successes of particular modes of action, particular attitudes, opinions, assertions, and beliefs exactly as we learn from life. Thus the value of great fiction, we begin to suspect, is not just that it entertains us or distracts us from our troubles, not just that it broadens our knowledge of people and places, but also that it helps us to know what we believe, reinforces those qualities that are noblest in us, leads us to feel uneasy about our faults and limitations.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(John Gardner [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/books.google.com\/books?id=i5Sah1JtvY4C&amp;pg=PA30#v=onepage&amp;q&amp;f=false\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8230;and:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>Why We Tell Stories<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"epigraph\">For Linda Foster<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\" style=\"width: 50%;\">I<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Because we used to have leaves<br>and on damp days<br>our muscles feel a tug,<br>painful now, from when roots<br>pulled us into the ground<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>and because our children believe<br>they can fly, an instinct retained<br>from when the bones in our arms<br>were shaped like zithers and broke<br>neatly under their feathers<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>and because before we had lungs<br>we knew how far it was to the bottom<br>as we floated open-eyed<br>like painted scarves through the scenery<br>of dreams, and because we awakened<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>and learned to speak<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\" style=\"width: 50%;\">2<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>We sat by the fire in our caves,<br>and because we were poor, we made up a tale<br>about a treasure mountain<br>that would open only for us<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>and because we were always defeated,<br>we invented impossible riddles<br>only we could solve,<br>monsters only we could kill,<br>women who could love no one else<br>and because we had survived<br>sisters and brothers, daughters and sons,<br>we discovered bones that rose<br>from the dark earth and sang<br>as white birds in the trees<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\" style=\"width: 50%;\">3<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Because the story of our life<br>becomes our life<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Because each of us tells<br>the same story<br>but tells it differently<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>and none of us tells it<br>the same way twice<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Because grandmothers looking like spiders<br>want to enchant the children<br>and grandfathers need to convince us<br>what happened happened because of them<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>and though we listen only<br>haphazardly, with one ear,<br>we will begin our story<br>with the word <em>and<\/em><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>(Lisel Mueller [<em><a href=\"https:\/\/www.poetryfoundation.org\/poetrymagazine\/browse?volume=132&amp;issue=4&amp;page=21\">source<\/a><\/em>])<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>[Image: the opening and closing paragraphs of draft number&#8230; uh, well, let&#8217;s call it Draft 1.5 of 23kpc.] From whiskey river&#8217;s commonplace book: Some people fear seeing or feeling anything about which there is no general agreement. 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