From whiskey river (originally published [PDF] in Beloit Poetry Journal, Fall/Winter 2004/2005):
It Wasn’t Death She Saw
But life:
skin dancing with flesh
like silk curtains that swirl in the wind
above her mother’s windowup up now puff! and in again
Or breath — is the wind breathing?
She’d been playing in the grass when it happened:
the snake flung
from the mower’s blade, rainbows
of ribbons in the airrainbows rainbows everywhere, catch a ribbon for your hair
She wrapped the pretty pieces in willow leaves and grass.
When she told her mother what she’d seen —
the way life
leapt out of the snake
just like a ballerina —
her mother beat her,
scrubbed her tongue with saltbut Mama, it was beautiful, like fireflies at night
She learned to hold her body
very still.
(by Kirstin Hotelling Zona: editor, Poetry Radio podcasts)
Not from whiskey river:
The Stare’s Nest by My Window
The bees build in the crevices
Of loosening masonry, and there
The mother birds bring grubs and flies.
My wall is loosening; honey-bees,
Come build in the empty house of the stare.We are closed in, and the key is turned
On our uncertainty; somewhere
A man is killed, or a house burned,
Yet no clear fact to be discerned:
Come build in the empty house of the stare.A barricade of stone or of wood;
Some fourteen days of civil war;
Last night they trundled down the road
That dead young soldier in his blood:
Come build in the empty house of the stare.We had fed the heart on fantasies,
The heart’s grown brutal from the fare;
More substance in our enmities
Than in our love; O honey-bees,
Come build in the empty house of the stare.
(W.B. Yeats)
Finally, there’s “(Looking for) The Heart of Saturday Night,” by Tom Waits, performed by Madeleine Peyroux (lyrics below):
Edit to add: And, what the heck, just for comparison here’s Shawn Colvin’s (live) very different but just as enchanting take on the same song — which I just found out about. (Thanks, Jules!)
(Looking for) The Heart of Saturday Night
Well you gassed her up
Behind the wheel
With your arm around your sweet one
In your Oldsmobile
Barrelin’ down the boulevard
You’re looking for the heart of Saturday nightAnd you got paid on Friday
And your pockets are jingling
And you see the lights
You get all tinglin’ cause you’re cruising with a six
You’re looking for the heart of Saturday nightThen you comb your hair
Shave your face
Trying to wipe out every trace
All the other days
In the week you know that this’ll be the Saturday
You’re reachin’ your peakStopping on the red
You’re going on the green
Tonight’ll be like nothing
You’ve ever seen
You’re barreling down the boulevard
Looking for the heart of Saturday nightTell me is the crack of the poolballs, neon buzzin
Telephone’s ringing; it’s your second cousin
Is it the barmaid that’s smiling from the corner of her eye
Magic of the melancholy tear in your eyeMakes it kind of quiver down in the core
You’re dreaming of them Saturdays that came before
Now you’re stumbling
You’re stumbling onto the heart of Saturday night
Now you’re stumbling
You’re stumbling onto the heart of Saturday night
Jules says
I have a love/hate relationship with Shawn Colvin’s music (love her early stuff — “Steady On” is classic — but her later stuff? Meh.) Anyway, she had this live album in….oh, I guess it was the late ’90s. I suppose just some tracks were live tracks, and the ones that weren’t were meh again…Anyway, every single track that was live was the blow-you-away kind (and I’ve seen her live and know how amazing she is in concert). One of those was a cover of this Tom Waits song. Ever heard it? It’s fabulous.
Thanks for the three-in-one today…as well as, again, for the Stafford!
John says
@Jules – I don’t know Colvin’s music well enough to have any sort of relationship at all with it. But maybe this needs to change… At least I think so, having heard the version you recommended (now incorporated above)!
Btw, the name of the album, according to Amazon (where I downloaded the track) was Cover Girl. Cute. And I got a kick out of seeing that she’d covered Dylan’s “You’re Gonna Make Me Lonesome When You Go” — another favorite recording from… Madeleine Peyroux. :)