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Prompt #312:
- Genre: drama
- Word: superficial
- Action: mopping the floor
Story (99 words, per Microsoft Word):
The housekeeper, Mrs. Parker, obsessively ran a mop over the same foot-wide tile of the ward’s cafeteria floor: over, and over, and over. That mirrored spot gleamed with a sheen of strange, focused intimacy. Someone would have to stop her soon: visiting hours began at 2:00. Residents’ families wouldn’t object to a floor even only superficially clean — but they’d complain about Mrs. Parker’s mophead: dry, filthy, a handful of filthy socks. The spot recalled a face: a curve of gray-brown hair across the forehead, a blurry swoop of silver mustache, a teasing smile.
Mr. Parker had passed overnight.